Oh whoa hey
So I think I’m done with the PLOT document, any other notes at this point are just proper notes etc.
So um… yeah. Here’s… everything. I took out anything that was directly spoiler-y, but it’s mostly complete. (Also, if you read the first two parts, the info in a couple places has been updated/added to, so it would behoove you to just read everything and not skip parts you “know you read before”)
If you’d tell me what you think, I’d appreciate that immensely*.
Egypt Idea PLOT Document Part 2
Jesus christ I didn’t even realize I’d thought of this much until I tried to take the time to type it all out /cries into the sunset
I still have to go ENTIRELY into the royal family (which isn’t terribly important BUT) and the systems of the tombs, as well as the what the palace looks like (because it’s very specific), then I need to actually start writing down the scraps of plot I’ve got and then I also—
FUCK I FORGOT TO ADD THE GOD OF THE UNDERWORLD EVEN THOUGH I TOLD MYSELF TO LIKE EIGHT TIMES DAMMIT (he’s a comet)
—crap, what else did I have to do? There was something else—
OH YEAH THEIR CALENDAR BECAUSE I GOT CONFUSED WHETHER IT WAS SOLAR OF LUNI-SOLAR OTL||||
Why does this damn story have so much inadvertent world-building? I DIDN’T MEAN ANY OF THIS
Egypt Idea PLOT Document Part 1
I’m tired and going to go to bed, but I didn’t finish, so… I’m just going to post what i’ve written already. The all-caps words at the bottom are the other important sub-headings I still need to get to OTL|||
ALL OF THIS IS WORLD-BUILDING, THERE HAS NOT BEEN A SINGLE WORD OF STORY OR PLOT RELEVANCE YET OTL|||
I love you if you read this, I understand if you don’t. Expect Part 2…. later
It’s too bad that you can’t have the lights of a city and the lights of the stars
The black words on the page
Are the shadows cast by my dreams
Thank you to the couple of followers I’ve gained since the last time I said anything
I’m very touched
[Writing] I don’t even know what this is
Part vent, part… wandering thoughts, I think. I have no idea where this will begin, or where it will end, or where it will go if it goes anywhere at all.
[SMtLaD] Cold Burn
Sorry, Mr. White is a little out-of-character-ly sassy here, but I kind of love it and it’s not a serious excerpt so I don’t really mind. This was written based on two (kind of four) prompts—Jess asked for “Igor and Ichabod brother fluff”, and AG gave me the prompts “it burned coldly”, “he/she/they/etc. fell to their knees”, and “shared names”, which made me think of this scene when Mr. White heals Igor and Ichabod after Chapter 13. (Mr. White’ healing burns cold, and they have the shared name of the “Halves”; the “falling to his knees” was just a really easy action to add)
Not EXACTLY brother fluff, but there you go!
Also, it’s a terrible ending, I’m sorry, but I didn’t know how to finish it.
(Let’s pretend the title refers to both the healing process and the sort of weird pseudo-emotions going on with Igor and Ichabod here shhhh I have no idea what to call this thing)
Oh no! I just realized that this little writing actually has a large spoiler in it for the end of the book that I can’t work out like I could the other one (which I was going to leave in and cross my fingers and hope people didn’t notice it)
I’m sorry! It’s meant to be read after the end of the first book, so when that’s done I’ll post that for you guys. u___u;; I’m sorry!
However, the prompts AG sent me actually fit pretty well with what Jess wanted, so I’ll write something new!